Talk:The End of All Things/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 16:54, 3 July 2013 (UTC)

I'll review this one. In fact, I'll review it right now! :) Miyagawa (talk) 16:54, 3 July 2013 (UTC)

Lead: I got picked up on this a while back and have since instituted it into all my Star Trek articles - you need to specify in the lead that it is an American production. Given that you've got it as a Fox science-fiction television series, I would suggest moving Fox to the same sentence as the broadcast and inserting American in where Fox is right now.

Plot: My only concern is that the plot is quite large. Ideally I aim for three paragraphs of about equal in size to your first three here.

Production: The sentence featuring two quotes from Jeff Pinkner needs a direct citation because of the quotes. Same goes for the first sentence with a quote from Blair Brown.

No link duplication, dab links and external links are all fine. Miyagawa (talk) 17:06, 3 July 2013 (UTC)

Placing this one on hold for the usual week. I'm sure fixing those few minor issues won't be any problem in that time. Miyagawa (talk) 17:07, 3 July 2013 (UTC)

I believe I have addressed your suggestions (the plot is hard to trim, but I attempted to merge a few things and delete a few extra parts). Thanks for reviewing! Ruby 2010/2013 00:13, 7 July 2013 (UTC)

Everything looks good, happy that this one meets the GA criteria. Miyagawa (talk) 08:17, 7 July 2013 (UTC)

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