Talk:The Good Huswifes Jewell/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:59, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

Will get to this in a day or two. Superb one, as always! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 13:59, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for taking this on! Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:14, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

• In Lead:
  • Would be good to add a word about who Dawson is although you link him.

Added a gloss. Chiswick Chap (talk)

• In Context:
  • with for example locally-grown Should this not use commas like "with, for example, locally-grown" ?

Done. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

• • Just curious, does "Medieval" mean the same as "Middle Ages" here? Can we use any one term?

It's basically the only available adjective for "of the Middle Ages". Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

• In Overview:
  • In the first few lines, it should be clear that "he" refers to the author.

Said "Dawson". Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

• In Approach:
  • Is the term "goal" is linked to not a bit too technical for our purpose?

Removed link. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

• • The "hearbes" link in the quote is a duplicate.

Removed link. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

• In Reception:
  • Elizabethan is linked twice, and both are duplinks.

Removed links. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

• • Who is Opaskar?

Glossed. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

• • Link violet a bit earlier, at first mention.

Done. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

That should be it. An interesting read, would make a great GA. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 09:23, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

Cool, ready for promotion! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 15:18, 6 April 2016 (UTC)