Talk:The Tower of Druaga/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Abryn (talk · contribs) 15:12, 25 August 2019 (UTC)

Starting review. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 15:12, 25 August 2019 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• The Gameplay section says that each floor will have different enemies, does this mean that all 60 floors have an enemy that is unique to them?
  • Some floors will introduce new enemy types, but not for every one of them. Rewrote to make it more clear. Namcokid47 (talk) 20:56, 25 August 2019 (UTC)
• From what I understand, Nintendo Life is only reliable for certain writers, and the reviewer Marcel van Duyn is a user of its website and not a member of its editorial staff.
  • Removed. Namcokid47 (talk) 20:56, 25 August 2019 (UTC)
• The Dragon Quest source doesn't seem to identify that Nakamura's appreciation for Endou was because of Druaga. Do you have any supplementary information to demonstrate its relevance to this article?
  • I thought I saw something where he said it was because of Druaga, but I can't find it anymore. The source also doesn't confirm it, so I removed it. Namcokid47 (talk) 20:56, 25 August 2019 (UTC)

Passing the article. Nice job! - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 21:01, 25 August 2019 (UTC)

Oh, except one of the images lacks a fair use rationale, which is an easy fix. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 21:02, 25 August 2019 (UTC)