Talk:The World of Strawberry Shortcake

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Wizardman in topic GA Review
Good articleThe World of Strawberry Shortcake has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
September 10, 2010Peer reviewReviewed
January 9, 2011Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on September 17, 2010.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that The World of Strawberry Shortcake, the first television special to feature American Greetings' popular character, was rejected by the major U.S. networks and premiered in syndication instead?
Current status: Good article

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Reviewer: -- Wizardman Operation Big Bear 06:21, 7 January 2011 (UTC) I will review this article. -- Cirt (talk) 16:44, 20 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Cirt's editing has been sparse for a while, and he has many other reviews to wrap up, so I'm going to take over this one. I'll have something up shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 06:21, 7 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

Here are the issues I found:

  • A new rationale will need to be made for the image, as the template currently used in the file looks to be deleted.
  • "who greet her "Happy Birthday"" greet her with, I presume was meant
  • "According to Jack Chojnacki, co-president of American Greetings' Those Characters from Cleveland," could you make it a bit more clear that Those Characters... is a subsidary of AG? At first i thought that was the whole name of the company.

Just a couple issues. I'll put the article on hold and pass it once the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:47, 8 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

Since there were only a couple issues, I went and fixed them myself, as this was waiting for a review long enough. As such, I'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 23:50, 9 January 2011 (UTC)Reply