Talk:Three Castles

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Zawed in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 03:10, 31 December 2017 (UTC)Reply

I will take this one, comments to follow in next few days. Zawed (talk) 03:10, 31 December 2017 (UTC)Reply

Very nicely written, I did a couple of tweaks in one section so please check you are OK with them. The only (minor) issues I picked up:

  • "In 1135, a major Welsh revolt took place...": is there a specific article that the Welsh revolt could be linked to? I assume there isn't but just wanted to check.
  • link Llywelyn ap Gruffudd?
  • link William de Braose?
  • retrieval date for note 21?
  • Images all appear to be appropriately tagged.
  • There is one dupe link, to Edward I, but the first mention is actually to him as a prince with the second being when he was king so I would be inclined to let that slide.
  • DAB link to White Castle
  • External links check OK

Looks good as always Hchc2009. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 06:19, 2 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

Cheers! All done, bar the Welsh revolt, which doesn't seem to have a good target link that I can find... Hchc2009 (talk) 08:42, 2 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
I consider this article to be well-written in a neutral tone and sourced appropriately. Passing as GA. Zawed (talk) 09:30, 2 January 2018 (UTC)Reply