Talk:Three Castles/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Zawed in topic GA Review
GA Review
editGA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 03:10, 31 December 2017 (UTC)
I will take this one, comments to follow in next few days. Zawed (talk) 03:10, 31 December 2017 (UTC)
Very nicely written, I did a couple of tweaks in one section so please check you are OK with them. The only (minor) issues I picked up:
- "In 1135, a major Welsh revolt took place...": is there a specific article that the Welsh revolt could be linked to? I assume there isn't but just wanted to check.
- link Llywelyn ap Gruffudd?
- link William de Braose?
- retrieval date for note 21?
- Images all appear to be appropriately tagged.
- There is one dupe link, to Edward I, but the first mention is actually to him as a prince with the second being when he was king so I would be inclined to let that slide.
- DAB link to White Castle
- External links check OK
Looks good as always Hchc2009. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 06:19, 2 January 2018 (UTC)
- Cheers! All done, bar the Welsh revolt, which doesn't seem to have a good target link that I can find... Hchc2009 (talk) 08:42, 2 January 2018 (UTC)
- I consider this article to be well-written in a neutral tone and sourced appropriately. Passing as GA. Zawed (talk) 09:30, 2 January 2018 (UTC)