Talk:Tony Kornheiser/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Lee Vilenski in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 14:21, 7 March 2019 (UTC)Reply


Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I will use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 11:18, 21 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Immediate Failures

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Prose

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Lede

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Early life

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Radio and podcast career

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Television Career

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Entertainment

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  • The 2004–2005 sitcom Listen Up! - Generally shows are denoted by their first showing, not the entire range. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 15:35, 7 March 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • Kornheiser is quoted as saying: "Did I always want to be part of a restaurant? No. But now with a podcast and trying to own my own content, the ability to put it on during the mornings or during the day and to have other people use it, that would be fun for me."[95] - quote seems redundant Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 15:35, 7 March 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • he continues to do so, and many fans of the show visit the restaurant to listen live - wording is very fan service. Say something like "presently, listeners can visit the restaurant to listen to the podcast live." Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 15:35, 7 March 2019 (UTC)Reply

Personal life

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Criticism

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Honors

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Books

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Notes & References

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GA Review

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
Comments

Overall, the article needs some work. I'll place this on hold, and give you up to 7 days to make the changes required. The article in general needs a copy edit, things like having too many (and too long) quotes borders on copyright. There's also a lot of cases of speech marks being used after punctuation incorrectly. I've also highlighted quite a few cases of WP:NPOV violations.

Please let me know if anything I've said above isn't clear. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 16:02, 7 March 2019 (UTC)Reply

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