Talk:Tropical Storm Axel (1992)/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: OhHaiMark (talk · contribs) 17:15, 28 August 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: TheNuggeteer (talk · contribs) 08:47, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

Reviewing this :) 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 08:47, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

Lead

• Intensifying at an abnormally low latitude, change comma to period, capitalize the next letter.
• This was as it passed needs ce, maybe remove the former period and uncapitalize the first letter, and you can say 'as it passed'. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:29, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

Meteorological history

• both areas of convection began consolidating Remove 'began' to fit it well.
• Can't see that source 2 stated that a warning by the JTWC called the TD 'O1W'.
• Source 2 does not mention January 6 (probably)?
• causing the former agency You mean 'latter'?
• later that day, the JTWC I don't think 'later that day' is necessary. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:29, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

  For your third point, if you see the map at page 44 of the JTWC report, it shows that Axel developed into a tropical storm on 6 January, and for your fourth point, the JMA didn't start naming storms until 2000. OhHaiMark (talk) 16:42, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

Preparations and impact

• and debris onto the island’s runway What type of runway? An airport?

Other comments

• The article is massively short, and the storm does not seem significant, is there an explanation to this?
• Going to assume that every mention of ref 3 is accurate, since I don't know how to read it. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:29, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

  For your first point, I'd argue that Axel was significant as it caused over $1 million in damage and wreaked havoc on the islands. OhHaiMark (talk) 16:46, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

My review! Hopefully you can answer these comments. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:29, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

The second problem for MH needs to be addressed. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 01:05, 31 August 2024 (UTC)

Everything looks good now! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 01:46, 31 August 2024 (UTC)

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