Talk:Tropical Storm Warren (1984)
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 03:37, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 03:37, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
- "After killing 17 while crossing the archipelago," As a disturbance?
- Should be pretty clear it was a disturbance already given that end of the sentence and the previous sentence. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
- "attaining peak strength." At?
- I tend to avoid the JTWC/JMA bullshit in the lead. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
- Who issued the TCFA?
- It's already mentioned in the wikilink for TCFA so while I sometimes mention it was issued by the JTWC, I don't think it should be something that is required. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
- JTWC abbreviation needed.
- "monsoonal sure of moisture"
- "afternoon November 2" Missing a word.
- Added a word. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
- "Offshore Marinduque Island," Here too.
- That's fine unless I'm missing something? I use "Offshore X," all the time and it's never been brought up before. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
- Probably best to replace Aurora with a red link than what it is right now.
- Even better, I replaced it with an actual blue link. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
- "Additionally, twelve other people died due landslides." Add "elsewhere".
- Assuming no Vietnamese impact.
- Vietnam is to TC info as oil is to water. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
That's it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 03:54, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review man. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)