Talk:Tropical Storm Warren (1984)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 03:37, 19 June 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 03:37, 19 June 2018 (UTC)

• "After killing 17 while crossing the archipelago," As a disturbance?
  • Should be pretty clear it was a disturbance already given that end of the sentence and the previous sentence. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)

• "attaining peak strength." At?
  • I tend to avoid the JTWC/JMA bullshit in the lead. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
• Who issued the TCFA?
  • It's already mentioned in the wikilink for TCFA so while I sometimes mention it was issued by the JTWC, I don't think it should be something that is required. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
• JTWC abbreviation needed.
  •  Done. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
• "monsoonal sure of moisture"
  • Fixed. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
• "afternoon November 2" Missing a word.
  • Added a word. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
• "Offshore Marinduque Island," Here too.
  • That's fine unless I'm missing something? I use "Offshore X," all the time and it's never been brought up before. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
• Probably best to replace Aurora with a red link than what it is right now.
  • Even better, I replaced it with an actual blue link. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
• "Additionally, twelve other people died due landslides." Add "elsewhere".
  • Sure. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
• Assuming no Vietnamese impact.
  • Vietnam is to TC info as oil is to water. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)

That's it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 03:54, 19 June 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for the review man. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)