Talk:Vince Villanucci/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 00:28, 22 October 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Generalissima (talk · contribs) 14:45, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

I figured I ought to review a couple of these. Should be done over the next few days. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 14:45, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

• @Generalissima: Do you think you'll be able to complete it before the end of the WikiCup? Thanks, BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:11, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

Criterion 1: Prose

• Lede solid, though it might be good to note that he was specifically a high school coach.
• Early life generally good.
  • I think the commas in the sentence beginning Villanucci also won the Golden Helmet award are unnecessary.
• College, Professional career, Coaching, and Personal life sections all good.

Criterion 2: Sourcing

• Citations are inconsistent on whether news agencies are cited or not. "All-MAC Team" is UPI, but not credited as such. Meanwhile, "CFL moves" is Canadian Press and does have an agency cited. There should be consistency one way or another here.

Source check to come.

Criterion 3: Breadth

Seems like a well-scoped article to me considering the available sources.

Criterion 4: Neutral

Yep.

Criterion 5: Stable

As far as I can see.

Criterion 6: Imaged

No possibility of a fair-use image, since he's deceased? Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 23:55, 31 October 2024 (UTC)