Talk:Windows 8.1/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Esquivalience (talk · contribs) 02:58, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

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I'll review this. Esquivalience ^t 02:58, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

Comments

(will update as I go)

Lead

• Windows 8.1 (codenamed Blue) is an upgrade for Windows 8, a version of Windows NT, a computer operating system released by Microsoft - "a version of Windows NT" is probably unnecessary for the lead, and this double appositive (although not grammatically incorrect) breaks up the sentence. My picky suggestion would be remove or reword it (again, just a picky suggestion).
  •  Done SSTflyer 07:44, 13 June 2016 (UTC)
• The article sometimes omits "Windows" when referring to Windows 8 and 8.1, and sometimes includes it. There seems to be no pattern ruling when "Windows" should be omitted. Change so it includes Windows uniformly through the whole lead, include "Windows" on the first mention per paragraph and omit it until the end of the paragraph, or exclude Windows uniformly (except for the first paragraph).
  •  Done "Windows" is now always included. SSTflyer 07:55, 13 June 2016 (UTC)

Is this review going to continue? Started fine but now it's been two months with nothing. Wizardman 16:09, 13 August 2016 (UTC)

Review closed due to inaction; nomination will be made available for a new reviewer. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:56, 17 August 2016 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.