Talk:Women of Faith

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Gusworld in topic First-pass edit

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As I stated in the about section, Women of Faith has had more than 3 million women have shared the conference experience since it began in the mid-1990s. I don't think it's a sermon, I just put information that they have on their website. Gobazkov

Neutrality?

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This article doesn't seem really neutral. Also, it has a lot of extraneous information (the themes of the various conferences?). I think it should be significantly trimmed down. Fishhook (talk) 14:17, 27 August 2008 (UTC)Reply

Agreed. Large chunks have clearly been copied directly from the organisation's web site (the copyright symbol is a clear indicator of that). I'll make a first pass at making it more suitable. Gusworld (talk) 00:10, 19 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

First-pass edit

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I've removed the duplicate, copy-and-pasted and non-neutral material. Article really needs a lot more neutral sources and more context for the events, but this at least has eliminated the blatant corporate info/PR stuff. Gusworld (talk) 00:33, 19 May 2012 (UTC)Reply