Talk:Younousse Sèye

Latest comment: 3 years ago by SL93 in topic Did you know nomination

Feedback from New Page Review process

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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Hi, thank you for creating the page. A very refreshing read..

Ashleyyoursmile! 11:36, 23 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk17:19, 14 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • Reviewed: 1972 Wings Tour Bus
  • Comment: The third source is in French, also please use all the sources together to verify the hook.

Created by Bookworm-ce (talk). Nominated by Ashleyyoursmile (talk) at 11:45, 23 March 2021 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:   - not inline
  • Interesting:  

QPQ:   - Not done
Overall:   First source checked through Google Books, second two were accessible and also checked out. Only a few quibbles:

  • The QPQ review is almost complete, only waiting for the other nomination's own QPQ. I'm not sure if we need to wait for that to be completed.
  • Per rules, you need to add inline citations to the hook text in the article's lead: "Considered Senegal's first woman painter, she is best known for her mixed-media works incorporating cowrie shells", since not all of it is repeated in the article body.
Otherwise, the article is good to go. Cheers :) DaßWölf 17:52, 24 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
Hi Daß Wölf, thank you very much for the review. I've added the inline citation in the lead. You can wait for the QPQ to be completed before approving the hook. :) Ashleyyoursmile! 18:07, 24 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
Yep, the hook is fine now. Just ping me when the other nom's QPQ is dealt with. DaßWölf 18:40, 24 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
  Good to go DaßWölf 23:06, 24 March 2021 (UTC)Reply