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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:20, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

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Improved to Good Article status by Lemonade51 (talk). Nominated by Matty.007 (talk) at 14:26, 5 July 2014 (UTC).

  • Recently became a GA and it is a "readable prose size". ALT1 is much more better. The only thing is needed a QPQ. FairyTailRocks 21:53, 7 July 2014 (UTC)
  • Comment regarding the article text for ALT1 "The defeat for Arsenal somewhat assured Wenger "[It] is not too important... " - not sure assured is the right word here. starship.paint "YES!" 13:06, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
  • Changed. No QPQ needed as not a self nom. Thanks, Matty.007 13:51, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
  • This review is incomplete, and needs to address the actual criteria: that the hook is supported both in the article and in the sourcing, and that the source citations are made by the end of the sentence in which the information occurs, and that the article is neutral, each paragraph is sourced, and there is no close paraphrasing or similar issues. DYK reviews are independent of GA reviews, so the latter cannot be reused in the former. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:53, 9 July 2014 (UTC)
  • Here is my full review:
  • The article is in its "readable prose size" with 9,116 characters.
  • It was promoted GA in July 4 and nominated in July 5
  • Ref no. 20 and 12 are dead.
  • Where is the reference in the original hook? ALT1 is supported by ref no. 32.
  • No disambig links found
  • Overall, the article is neutral and full of references. (I assume good faith that some references like the Daily Mail and offline sources are reliable) The only thing to be resolved are the dead links and my question about the original hook. FairyTailRocks 20:05, 15 July 2014 (UTC)
  • Sorry, original hook was error. Fixed 404. Thanks, Matty.007 11:00, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
  • Ref #12's archive URL isn't working directly, but imputting the web address at [1] and clicking Google Cache is working for me. Perhpas remove the URL and say it's offline (which it is now)? Thanks, Matty.007 11:04, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
  • Hey sorry for the late reply. To ensure its verification, online sources are much better than offline. You could use Google Cache for this, only if there is no archived material in the Wayback Machine or any archive-related website. All in all, I believe it should be ready in the Main page!
  • When I go to the Google Cache it works, but linking it only gets a 404. Thanks for the review, Matty.007 07:55, 20 July 2014 (UTC)
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