Template:Did you know nominations/2013 Stadium Super Trucks season
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 20:37, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
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2013 Stadium Super Trucks season
edit- ... that the 2013 Stadium Super Trucks season's race at the Los Angeles Memorial Coliseum was on the first asphalt track laid at the stadium?
Moved to mainspace by ZappaOMati (talk). Self nominated at 19:41, 8 June 2014 (UTC).
New enough (for 8 June) and long enough. Hook checks out online with citation #9. No problem with disambig links. Article is fully referenced. It is objective and neutral (with two exceptions, see issue 3 below). Spot checks found no copyvio or close paraphrasing. Issues: (1) QPQ not yet done. (2)Citations #7 and #10 are deadlinks.(3)Re neutrality. There are two unnecessary quotations which look like hype or promotion material, which have been included in passages supposed to be about naming and scheduling: "People are able enjoy a fun night of racing and entertainment while being in some of the finest facilities throughout North America" and "We would like to thank everyone at Caesars Palace and The Forum Shops at Caesars for giving us the opportunity to present a race like this. Getting to race SST trucks on this property is something phenomenal". Please remove these sentences. I should add that hype is of course a noticeable feature of monster truck shows, but if it's to be included in the article you should give it a separate paragraph or section, and say that it is hype and show which are the exaggerated elements. When issues 1-3 have been resolved,this nom should be OK. --Storye book (talk) 14:07, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
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Thank you, ZappaOMati. All issues resolved. Good to go. --Storye book (talk) 19:47, 30 June 2014 (UTC)
- Comment: removed "ever"; "first" already implies "ever". BobAmnertiopsis∴ChatMe! 13:52, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you, Bobamnertiopsis. Hook change accepted. Still GTG. --Storye book (talk)
