Template:Did you know nominations/Lou Marconi

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by BobAmnertiopsisChatMe! 00:43, 4 July 2014 (UTC)

Lou Marconi

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Created/expanded by 72.74.197.45 (talk). Self nominated at 02:27, 13 June 2014 (UTC).

  • Long enough, despite being created on June 2 and nominated on June 13, the page was moved to article space the day before, so it's fine; sources look fine, hooks cited, good to go. My preference would be to go with the original hook. NFLisAwesome 18:31, 30 June 2014 (UTC)
  • I pulled this hook out of the prep area because the article doesn't actually say that Pro Wrestling Illustrated called his nickname one of the most unusual. I agree that the original hook is far better than the ALT hooks. Could it be revised as below?
  • Avoid repeating the same word in the hook, e.g. "nickname". The Rambling Man (talk) 20:53, 2 July 2014 (UTC)
  • Review of ALTs 4 and 5: Both hooks hooky enough and short enough, and referenced to offline citation #23, taken AGF. Note: Above review is taken on trust and still stands. I have struck original hook, and "nickname" in ALT4 in line with the above comments. --Storye book (talk) 15:34, 3 July 2014 (UTC)
  • All issues resolved. Good to go with ALT 1, 2, 3, 4 or 5. My own preference is for ALT5 because it's short and snappy. --Storye book (talk) 15:34, 3 July 2014 (UTC)