- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by RoySmith (talk) 22:08, 24 September 2022 (UTC)
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Andrea Rinaldi
- ... that former Atalanta player Andrea Rinaldi player died of an aneurysm aged 19 in 2020? Source: https://www.bbc.com/sport/football/52579298
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- Comment: I don't need QPQ, it's my fourth nomination
5x expanded by Dr Salvus (talk). Self-nominated at 23:28, 9 September 2022 (UTC).
- "An" should be added between "of" and "aneurysm". You might also want to consider changing "aged 19" to "at the age of 19", if it doesn't exceed the character limit by doing so. Looks good otherwise.Augusthorsesdroppings10 (talk) 19:47, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
- @Augusthorsesdroppings10:, Adog has made some changes which changed how his death had been. The page has enough caracters. Dr Salvus 11:52, 17 September 2022 (UTC)
New enough and long enough. QPQ not needed—fourth nomination. I will note something: we don't take stubs, but that does mean you need to re-rate the page and remove stub tags (I have done this, as it's no longer a stub). Hook fact checks out to the source. No textual issues. I am fine with "aged 19" (a more British English formulation) in this topic area: "at the age of" would also work well, but that's a varieties of English question. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 08:03, 24 September 2022 (UTC)
- @Sammi Brie: I'd prefer keeping "aged 19". Dr Salvus 08:45, 24 September 2022 (UTC)