- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 11:27, 27 September 2020 (UTC)
| DYK toolbox |
|---|
Aran Bell
... that ballet dancer Aran Bell portrayed Romeo in Romeo and Juliet when he was only 19?Source: "And on Wednesday afternoon, Aran Bell, at just 19, makes an important debut: as Romeo in Kenneth MacMillan’s production of “Romeo and Juliet.”" ([1])- ALT1:
... that Aran Bell became a principal dancer with the American Ballet Theatre when he was only 21?Source: "Mr. Bell, at 21, is young to be promoted to principal dancer — but he is used to doing things early." ([2])
- ALT1:
- Reviewed: Raissa Calza
- Comment: Personally prefer ALT0
Created by Corachow (talk). Self-nominated at 18:25, 15 September 2020 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline and either hook could be used, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:59, 16 September 2020 (UTC)
These hooks mirror the one you wrote for Calvin Royal III. Is there anything else to say about these dancers other than their youth? Yoninah (talk) 23:47, 20 September 2020 (UTC)
- Yoninah He is 21. The only other option I can come out with - ALT2:
... that as a child, ballet dancer Aran Bell was featured in the documentary First Position?Corachow (talk) 23:57, 20 September 2020 (UTC)
- @Corachow: I see, it's just over 1500 characters. Is there any more detail you can add? By the way, the cites for the birth/death dates do not belong in the lead. Yoninah (talk) 00:01, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
- Yoninah I expanded a little bit, it now has around 1700 characters. Corachow (talk) 16:23, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
- OK, I found a source for his birth date. What do you think about this rewording of your ALT0 hook:
- ALT0a:
... that at age 19, Aran Bell made his debut as Romeo in Romeo and Juliet as a member of the American Ballet Theatre's corps de ballet?Yoninah (talk) 17:10, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: Thanks for the new source! I like this new hook, though I suggest linking corps de ballet. Corachow (talk) 17:16, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
- OK, I did that, but tried to avoid a sea of blue with the name of the dance company. I also wonder what you think of more of a combination hook:
- ALT3: ... that Aran Bell, who was profiled at age 11 in the dance documentary First Position, became a principal dancer for the American Ballet Theatre at age 21? Yoninah (talk) 17:21, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
- Yoninah He is 21. The only other option I can come out with - ALT2:
Approving ALT3, giving it an AGF tick because I can't access the New York Times source. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:54, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
