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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 10:39, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

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Audition (The Fools Who Dream)

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Emma Stone
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5x expanded by Pamzeis (talk). Self-nominated at 05:11, 13 July 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Audition (The Fools Who Dream); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Pamzeis: Good article, but I feel like a better hook could be made here. Onegreatjoke (talk) 03:11, 15 July 2023 (UTC)

Would any of these alternatives:
  • ALT3: ... that La La Land's composer initially wanted "Audition (The Fools Who Dream)" to be the film's "award song" instead of "City of the Stars"? [2]
  • ALT4: ... that a journalist said La La Land's "Audition (The Fools Who Dream)" features "the world's most accommodating key change, the equivalent of going half a speed faster on a treadmill"? [3]
  • ALT5: ... that "Audition" signifies how La La Land is "back in old-musical Heaven"? [4]
  • ALT6: ... that La La Land's "Audition" takes place after a long absence of musical numbers, signifying how the film is "back in old-musical Heaven"? [5]
work? Lemme know what you think! Pamzeis (talk) 11:13, 15 July 2023 (UTC)
ooh, I love La La Land! I'm learning all the pieces on piano :) going to say no to ALT5, as it looks like it expresses an opinion in wikivoice; of the choices presented, I think ALTs 0 or 3 are best. Pinging Onegreatjoke for a final call. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 22:34, 15 July 2023 (UTC)
Approve. Onegreatjoke (talk) 16:31, 19 July 2023 (UTC)
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