Template:Did you know nominations/Avi Kwa Ame National Monument

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 16:43, 25 March 2023 (UTC)

Avi Kwa Ame National Monument

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Joshua trees in Avi Kwa Ame National Monument

... that Avi Kwa Ame National Monument, protected as a national monument on March 21, is a significant habitat of Joshua trees and threatened desert tortoises? Source: https://www.whitehouse.gov/briefing-room/presidential-actions/2023/03/21/a-proclamation-on-establishment-of-the-avi-kwa-ame-national-monument/
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Stephanie Goldner

Created by Reywas92 (talk). Self-nominated at 14:24, 22 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Avi Kwa Ame National Monument; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy compliance:

Adequate sourcing: - n
Neutral:
Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Reywas92: Good article. Though, i would prefer for you to add an inline citation at the end of every paragraph before I approve. Onegreatjoke (talk) 19:14, 22 March 2023 (UTC) Done, thanks! Reywas92^Talk 03:01, 23 March 2023 (UTC) Approving. Onegreatjoke (talk) 19:10, 24 March 2023 (UTC)

@Reywas92 and Onegreatjoke: I was going to promote but we have something that needs to be corrected. Our hook claims that the tortoise is "endangered". The word endangered does not appear in our article and is also not in any reference that I can find. The closest I can find is the BLM calls the tortoise threatened (ref 15). The USGS makes a distinction between the two. To comply with DYKCRIT#3b we need to add threatened to the article and cite it with the BLm reference or some other RS. Bruxton (talk) 16:30, 25 March 2023 (UTC)

User:Bruxton, I took that from the infobox at desert tortoise where the IUCN calls it "critically endangered", but I've revised the hook and article to match FWS's listing as threatened, thanks. Reywas92^Talk 16:37, 25 March 2023 (UTC)