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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 23:54, 10 March 2013 (UTC).
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- ... that Battery Path (pictured) was located on Hong Kong Island's waterfront with Victoria Harbour when it opened, but is now situated further inland due to the amount of land reclamation that has been undertaken?
- ALT1:... that Battery Path (pictured) was once located on Hong Kong Island's waterfront with Victoria Harbour?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Preise dein Glücke, gesegnetes Sachsen, BWV 215
5x expanded by Bloom6132 (talk). Self nominated at 13:46, 8 March 2013 (UTC).
Length, 5x expansion verified by DYK check. Image is from Wikipedia Commons. All paragraphs have inline citations. Hook is supported by inline citation. ALT1 hook is fine. Original hook exceeds 200-character limit, but could be shortened as: 'that Battery Path (pictured) was once located on Hong Kong Island's waterfront with Victoria Harbour, but is now situated inland as a result of land reclamation'? Just need to decide which hook to use. NinaGreen (talk) 05:56, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
- Under the supplementary guidelines rule C8, the three three … and the "that" don't count towards the character count. Also, the unofficial E5 rule suggests that the "(pictured)" does not count, so excluding all three of these, the hook sneaks in slightly under at 199 characters. However, the hook you proposed sounds good, so I'll be willing to come to a compromise on that. —Bloom6132 (talk) 06:01, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
- No need to compromise. If the original hook is under 200 characters according to the rules, then it's fine. Choose the hook you'd like, and the article will be good to go. NinaGreen (talk) 18:00, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
- I think the final promoter of the DYK is the one who picks the hook. Other than that, is this DYK ready for a green tick? —Bloom6132 (talk) 18:04, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
