Template:Did you know nominations/Benjamin Walworth Arnold House and Carriage House
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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:18, 9 October 2011 (UTC)
Benjamin Walworth Arnold House and Carriage House
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- ... that the Benjamin Walworth Arnold House and Carriage House (house pictured) are Stanford White's only buildings in Albany, New York?
- ALT1:... that Benjamin Walworth Arnold's house (pictured) was the first one in Albany, New York to be fully electrified?
- Reviewed: Henry Josey [1]
- Comment: If there's a way someone can find to combine these two hooks (which I'd love to do, but have a problem since I can't extend the "fully electrified" to the carriage house) please try.
Created/expanded by Daniel Case (talk). Self nom at 19:59, 1 October 2011 (UTC)
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- Looks good, expanded from 700 characters on August 21 to over 6800 characters on September 28.IvoShandor (talk) 19:21, 9 October 2011 (UTC)
- Possible combined ALT hook: ...that the Benjamin Walworth Arnold House and Carriage House was Stanford White's only design in Albany, New York and the city's first fully electrified house? IvoShandor (talk) 19:21, 9 October 2011 (UTC)
- It's a bit long at 157 characters but maybe it could be further trimmed, I will keep thinking on it. IvoShandor (talk) 19:21, 9 October 2011 (UTC)