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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 23:32, 20 March 2013 (UTC).
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Bhakta Vidur
edit- ... that Bhakta Vidur (1921) was the first Indian film to face a ban?
- ALT1: ... that Bhakta Vidur (1921) was India's first banned film?
Created/expanded by Titodutta (talk), Ekabhishek (talk). Self nominated at 02:50, 17 March 2013 (UTC).
Hook needs to be directly cited, per guidelines. And it would be better for mentions of the film's title in the body to be italicized. Cheers. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 05:06, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
- a) Hook is directly cited in the lead b) italicize done! BTW, which one do you prefer main hook or ALT?--Tito Dutta (contact) 05:13, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
- a) okay, noted but nevertheless, you should be citing again in the body and not just in the lede. I think ALT1 is catchier. Cheers, ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 05:32, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
- a) has been done! --Tito Dutta (contact) 05:37, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
- Okay, but one more thing: What's reference 5? ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 10:21, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
- That's today's Bengali newspaper. The article has lots of information, but, I don't know if it is live in web. Plot section needs no citation! --Tito Dutta (contact) 10:33, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
- Giving an AGF
as I cannot find the cited books to verify. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 11:48, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
- Which one? All books have previews! --Tito Dutta (contact) 11:52, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
- Well for an instance, you link this not to the URL of the exact pages. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 12:03, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
- That is a chronology of significant events. Please scroll down to the bottom of the page and see "year 1921" which contains information on the places where the film was banned! At the lead's end there are few more citations to support the hook! --Tito Dutta (contact) 12:14, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
- Huh? Sorry, I'm not getting you... ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 13:38, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
- See year 1921 in that book's page, r the references added at the end of the lead section of the Wikipedia article! --Tito Dutta (contact) 13:46, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
- Giving an AGF
