Template:Did you know nominations/British Rail Class 374
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 08:55, 28 April 2013 (UTC).
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British Rail Class 374
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- ... that the Class 374 is the first high speed train type purchased by a part owned French rail company not to be based on the TGV?
Created by Hammersfan (talk). Self nominated at 16:42, 16 April 2013 (UTC).
Reviewed - well referenced, formatted and written article, long enough and recent, original. Hook works, but a little dry Garyvines (talk) 14:04, 23 April 2013 (UTC)
- Can you be a little more specific by "a little dry" Hammersfan (talk) 14:10, 23 April 2013 (UTC)
- Its a good article and good hook as it is, I just felt it could be more direct. DYK Hook guide uses the term punchy, catchy, the conditional statements seem to water it down. is it still correct to say ALT1 "... that the Class 374 is the first part French owned high speed train type not to be based on the TGV?" - Garyvines (talk) 14:34, 23 April 2013 (UTC)
- That could work Hammersfan (talk) 15:12, 23 April 2013 (UTC)