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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 11:34, 3 October 2013 (UTC)

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Buddhism, the Fulfilment of Hinduism

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Swami Vivekananda

Moved to mainspace by Nvvchar (talk), Titodutta (talk), Bonkers The Clown (talk). Nominated by Titodutta (talk) at 09:54, 25 September 2013 (UTC).

  •  Doing..., have to log off for now will come back with comments tomorrow. Sohambanerjee1998 14:02, 25 September 2013 (UTC)

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  • Created or expanded 5x - checkY, created
  • Image not fair use, no copyright violation - checkY
  • prose, nice - 601 words, readable prose size - checkY
  • QPQ - checkY No Issues here
  • Neutral, close paraphrasing, unsourced - checkY, again absolutely fine.
  • Verify - checkY, hook referenced in the first reference itself.
  • Hook - This is my area of concern, the hook fails to hook on to the readers interest, more so if the reader is unaware of Swami Vivekananda and his works. Sohambanerjee1998 13:19, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
  • Added descriptor. Tito☸Dutta 15:22, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
Now it looks better, though some more information about the two religions or even the use of word religion could make the hook better. At the time being its of 106 characters, well below the 200 KAR limit. Sohambanerjee1998 15:31, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
  • Not needed, I think. Tito☸Dutta 15:34, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
(edit conflict)Suggestion - ALT1... that the Hindu monk Swami Vivekananda (pictured) opined that Buddhism was actually the extension or fulfilment of Hinduism?
  • Sounds good, but, if you suggest hook, you'll not be able to review the nomination anymore. --Tito☸Dutta 15:45, 26 September 2013 (UTC) No, that "extension", "actually' are not needed. --Tito☸Dutta 15:46, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
Fine leave it looks good the way it is. Except for the fact that Hindu means Indian, therefore the Indian at the beginning should be dropped. Sohambanerjee1998 15:52, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
Will give it one good look and then I'll list whatever the issues (there will hardly be any) are present. Tomorrow. Sohambanerjee1998 16:02, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
Check it for tense, spellings etc. just to be sure. Other than that and the removal of Indian in the hook its good to go. Will give the final verdict when these are resolved. Sohambanerjee1998 16:13, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
Hindu does not mean Indian. Tito☸Dutta 19:57, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
I know it does'n't mean it but the Indian seems a bit redundant. Sohambanerjee1998 05:12, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
Tito and Nv, I will go for a Wiki-break soon. Therefore I want to complete it soon. Please remove the Indian as it is redundant so that I can give it the go. Sohambanerjee1998 14:15, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
  • I don't want to keep "Hindu" only, I may remove both Hindu and Indian. Tito☸Dutta 14:25, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
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