- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:26, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
Buster Warenski
edit- ... that Buster Warenski made a replica of the dagger found in King Tut's tomb containing over 32 ounces of pure gold?
Created/expanded by Mike Searson (talk). Nominated by Mike Searson (talk) at 19:34, 30 August 2011 (UTC)
Too short by 400 chars. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:27, 31 August 2011 (UTC)
- I think I'm there now, thanks.--Mike - Μολὼν λαβέ 14:01, 31 August 2011 (UTC)
- Hook: Interesting enough, short enough, cited.
- Article: New enough, long enough. Cause of death not cited. Spotchecks show some paraphrasing issues.
- Summary: Please add a reference for the cause of death and eliminate the close paraphrasing. Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:40, 31 August 2011 (UTC)
- Done. I changed it to just that "he died". His obituary lists "peacefully", but I know it was a heart attack and outside of forum postings, I could not find a reliable source listing it as such. I will check a few knife magazines from 2005 tonight to see if they listed cause of death. I changed the lists of materials around, but am not sure if it will still look like paraphrasing. For the record, I did not copy and paste anything and some of what is termed as close paraphrasing in what you showed me appears coincidental. I think this is a hazard of "summary style", there's only so many ways you can say certain things.--Mike - Μολὼν λαβέ 16:35, 31 August 2011 (UTC)
I know, especially when it comes to the names of companies and whatnot (you can't say it any other way). I didn't think it was that bad, but it's always best to be safe than sorry. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:59, 31 August 2011 (UTC)
