Template:Did you know nominations/Cantata misericordium

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The result was: promoted by sovereign°sentinel (contribs) 15:32, 15 August 2015 (UTC)

Cantata misericordium

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... that although Cantata misericordium recounts the parable of the good Samaritan, the Red Cross refused to allow it to use the Biblical text?

Reviewed: Coffee production in Peru

Created by Nikkimaria (talk). Self-nominated at 21:02, 6 August 2015 (UTC).

- The hook itself is not sourced but long enough, nwe enough, and interesting. Nweds a bit work. Shhhhwwww!! (talk) 22:22, 6 August 2015 (UTC)

Er, what? The hook is sourced, to this. Nikkimaria (talk) 01:56, 7 August 2015 (UTC)

This is the third of three inadequate reviews submitted as QPQs for a nomination, all of which failed to check any of the "Within policy" criteria, a requirement for all DYK reviews. Nikkimaria, I think I'd make sure one of the Emmanuel Music references appeared after both the first sentence about the parable and another after the "firm nonsectarian stance" sentence. As it stands, the hook facts are not all referenced by the end of the sentence that contains them, and really should be by DYK rules. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:29, 7 August 2015 (UTC)

Done. Nikkimaria (talk) 12:41, 7 August 2015 (UTC)

Length, age, and QPQ are fine; firmly neutral, the Red Cross would be proud; no text stealing or passing off of any description; cites where cites should be; hook fact pretty hooky and cited. Good to go. (Caption on the image in the article should be reworded to "The composer is unaware that he is being observed by tiny shadow children.") Belle (talk) 15:45, 10 August 2015 (UTC)