- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Lightburst talk 21:42, 28 October 2023 (UTC)
Catherine Wedd
- ... that when she was elected to the New Zealand parliament, Catherine Wedd defeated her former coworker at a marketing company? Source: "...befitting their days working together at Attn Marketing PR in Havelock North. Now the two women are pitted head-to-head, with Lorck the incumbent Labour MP for Tukituki and Wedd confirmed as National candidate for the October 14 general election." from [Herald article]
Moved to mainspace by Villian Factman (talk) and DrThneed (talk). Nominated by DrThneed (talk) at 23:52, 25 October 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Catherine Wedd; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Overall: 
I'd recommend reordering the hook a bit for clarity, naming Lorck and dropping the detail about the kind of company that it was, as that's not the interesting part of the hook. Something like:
I'd recommend reordering the hook a bit for clarity, naming Lorck and dropping the detail about the kind of company that it was, as that's not the interesting part of the hook. Something like: