Template:Did you know nominations/Chief Minister (Pakistan)

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 21:07, 18 June 2013 (UTC)

Chief Minister (Pakistan)

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Created by Faizan (talk). Self nominated at 14:49, 9 June 2013 (UTC).

  • Multiple issues: 1) You have not reviewed that QPQ. Two reviewers were already on it 2) Multiple paragraphs and sections are unsourced. 3) Lead should be written in summary style! --Tito Dutta  (talkcontributionsemail) 15:11, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
 Doing... Fixing references, and the lead. Thanks Ttto. Faizan 15:14, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
They were not multiple paragraphs. Only one paragraph was unsourced. I have added some references. Did a heck of work at the template. I am looking for more references, but cannot find much on the topic. Any further service? Faizan 15:47, 10 June 2013 (UTC)
Have also rewritten the lead. Faizan 15:48, 10 June 2013 (UTC)
  • I am very busy at this moment (and actually I came here to comment on your QPQ and not to review it) and also I feel article should be expanded. Last time when I counted, it had just over 1500 characters. In body there is almost nothing but a long quote. I'll follow this DYK discussion. If no one else attends it within next few days, I'll restart review. --Tito Dutta  (talkcontributionsemail) 15:59, 10 June 2013 (UTC)
No problem, the QPQ is fine now. I have also reviewed another nomination. And the article is quite long now. Currently, it has approximately 2000 characters. I have added more to the body. Waiting for a review here. Faizan 16:02, 10 June 2013 (UTC)