Template:Did you know nominations/Dan Jennings

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 06:01, 8 May 2012 (UTC)

Dan Jennings

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• ... that Major League Baseball pitcher Dan Jennings has been confused for the son of the Miami Marlins' team vice president, who shares the same name?

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Negros Occidental's 5th legislative district special election, 2012

Created/expanded by Muboshgu (talk). Self nom at 16:44, 1 May 2012 (UTC)

• Article is long enough and new enough. Well sourced and spot-checking reveals not copyvio or unduly close paraphrasing. The hook is short enough and is supported by an in-line citation. QPQ complete. All looks good. Cbl62 (talk) 03:31, 8 May 2012 (UTC)

• Promotion comment: the hook was confusing in that it could be read that the team vice president had a son named Dan, not that the veep himself was Dan. Also, the Marlins have many vice presidents, so "the [Marlins] team vice president" was somewhat misleading. The hook that is being placed into a prep area has been revised and edited as follows:

• ... that Major League Baseball pitcher Dan Jennings of the Miami Marlins has been mistakenly thought to be the son of team vice president Dan Jennings? BlueMoonset (talk) 06:01, 8 May 2012 (UTC)