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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:33, 17 March 2012 (UTC)

David fitzGerald

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Created/expanded by Ealdgyth (talk). Self nom at 15:47, 7 March 2012 (UTC)

  • Date, length verified, AGFed on the hook and the paraphrasing. I would like to see the colloquialism "a bit murky" replaced with something a bit more elegant, but that's not a major issue. The hook also seems a bit bland to me, so, if I may, Imna propose another (that I think someone else will have to approve?):
  • I'm fine with either... Ealdgyth - Talk 18:40, 16 March 2012 (UTC)