Template:Did you know nominations/Domaine de Marie

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The result was: promoted by Zanhe (talk) 16:32, 22 January 2016 (UTC)

Domaine de Marie

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Domaine de Marie church, Vietnam

~~the wife of former a former French Colonial governor is buried in the Cherry Church in Vietnam?~~

Created/expanded by Oaktree b (talk). Self-nominated at 22:51, 23 November 2015 (UTC).

Not transcluded until 5 January 2016 as part of orphan clean up. Striking the original hook as it does not include the article name (which I have also changed to remove the disambiguator and fixed the links above) and so I am proposing a new one.
(ALT1): ... that Suzanne Humbert, the wife of French Governor of Indochina Jean Decoux, is buried in the Domaine de Marie Catholic convent in Da Lat, Vietnam?
(ALT1a): ... that Suzanne Humbert, the wife of French Governor of Indochina Jean Decoux, is buried in the "Cherry Church" in Da Lat, Vietnam?

@Oaktree b: As the creator / nominator, your comments are requested. EdChem (talk) 12:03, 5 January 2016 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy compliance:

Adequate sourcing:
Neutral:
Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: - Four of the phrases (or parts of the phrases) in architecture appear to be copied word for word from viewnamonline.com. I'm not too experienced on the matter of what constitutes plagiarism, but I thought I would at least bring this issue up. It is clearly visible on Earwig's detector.

Hook eligibility:

Cited: - There is sufficient citation for the claim that Suzanne Humbert is buried there and that she is the wife of Jean Decoux. However, there is no mention in the article that Jean Decoux was the French Governor of IndoChina. The claim that it is refered to as Cherry Church needs an inline citation at the end of the sentence (this is only for ALT1a); I have verified it.
Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: I prefer ALT1, as it uses the article name. Jolly Ω Janner 20:16, 6 January 2016 (UTC)

I have added "Governor-General of French Indochina from July 1940 to 9 March 1945" to that section. My nomination was stalled at the three-quarter point, the nomination process was too confusing for me. I just left it as is. The "plagarism" can easily be corrected. Oaktree b (talk) 21:34, 9 January 2016 (UTC)

Oaktree b, please let us know when you have corrected the copying, so we can continue with the review. Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 19:16, 10 January 2016 (UTC)

I've cleaned up the article myself, so an independent reviewer is needed. I have also proposed an image now. Jolly Ω Janner 01:25, 19 January 2016 (UTC)

The issues with this article have successfully addressed by User:Jolly Janner. The article is now in compliance with wikipedia policies. As such, I have added Jolly Janner's name to the DYK credits. Both alternate hooks are usable and verifiable to online references that are cited. No QPQ has been done, but I am glad to donate one of mine to move this article's promotion along. Best.4meter4 (talk) 05:20, 20 January 2016 (UTC)

It would appear that both Oaktree and myself are "noobs" as neither of us have five or more DYK credits. QPQ shouldn't be an issue. Jolly Ω Janner 08:44, 21 January 2016 (UTC)