Template:Did you know nominations/Edward Iacobucci

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:33, 2 October 2016 (UTC)

Edward Iacobucci

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Edward Iacobucci
Edward Iacobucci

Moved to mainspace by Patar knight (talk). Self-nominated at 15:00, 8 September 2016 (UTC).

  • ALT1 is classic example of a hook failing the "interesting" test. EEng 07:06, 9 September 2016 (UTC)
  • This article is new enough and long enough. It is neutral and appears not to contain close paraphrasing and the image is appropriately licensed. However, the hook facts are supported in the article by a source that does not even mention his father as far as I can see. Assuming you can find a more suitable source, can I suggest ALT2
Much better, IMO. EEng 06:21, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
Fixed the sourcing. Would like to see Frank Iacobucci in the hook, so maybe:
would work? ---- Patar knight - chat/contributions 03:40, 29 September 2016 (UTC)
Even better, I think. EEng 05:14, 29 September 2016 (UTC)
for the hooks left, following the review above, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:26, 29 September 2016 (UTC)