- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:11, 25 May 2018 (UTC)
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Fiery minivet
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A male fiery minivet
- ... that forest fires are a threat to the fiery minivet (pictured)? Source: "Forest fires have also had a damaging effect (particularly in 1997-1998)." IUCN Red List
- Reviewed: FotoFilm Tijuana
- Comment: There is probably a more interesting way to phrase the hook.
5x expanded by Gulumeemee (talk). Self-nominated at 04:44, 19 May 2018 (UTC).
Article length and age are fine, no copyvio or plagiarism concerns, reliable sources are used. Looks good, but the hook might be a little too generic.
- [Unsigned review by Shobhit102]
- I was trying to make the hook sound interesting with the words "fire" and "fiery". Maybe
- ALT1: ... that fiery trees are a threat to the fiery minivet (pictured)? Gulumeemee (talk) 09:34, 19 May 2018 (UTC)
- I have promoted this without the image to the quirky slot because readers will likely not know what a minivet is and will click to find out. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:11, 25 May 2018 (UTC)
