Template:Did you know nominations/First Flight (Star Trek: Enterprise)

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The result was: promoted by — Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:39, 15 March 2013 (UTC).

First Flight (Star Trek: Enterprise)

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... that during the filming of the Star Trek: Enterprise episode "First Flight", the cast and crew were presented with a flag from the aircraft carrier USS Enterprise (CVN-65) (pictured)?

Reviewed: FutureSex/LoveSound
Comment: A rather unusual image as I think its the only free use image of any Star Trek cast members actually in uniform.

Created/expanded by Miyagawa (talk). Self nominated at 13:45, 9 March 2013 (UTC).

I will review this shortly. Chris857 (talk) 04:34, 10 March 2013 (UTC)

Actually, review will happen tomorrow, but I have begun a copyedit. Chris857 (talk) 04:54, 10 March 2013 (UTC)

Article expanded almost 9x to about 10,000 characters within last few days
QPQ satisfied
Cited inline
Neutral
Both images are PD-USGov
Sources appear sufficiently reliable for a TV show
I see no copyvio

Issues/Suggestions:

You might want to look through the paragraph of reception dealing with the ratings, as the grammar doesn't flow well for me

Chris857 (talk) 21:03, 10 March 2013 (UTC)

I've copyedited the ratings paragraph. Miyagawa (talk) 21:12, 10 March 2013 (UTC)

That's definitely better. Chris857 (talk) 19:42, 11 March 2013 (UTC)

This nomination seems to have been sitting for a few days with no movement, so hopefully no one will mind if I step in to finish reviewing? Chris857 has indicated article checks above and I have also looked at the reception section queried, which seems fine.

Hook is 183 characters and supported by online ref #1 in final sentence of 'Casting' section; correctly formatted; and sufficiently interesting (even to a non Trekkie aficionado like me!).

Looks fine. SagaciousPhil - Chat 13:13, 15 March 2013 (UTC)