- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 02:02, 5 November 2013 (UTC)
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France Dimanche
edit- ... that in 1949 copies of France Dimanche were seized in France because they were carrying pictures of princess Margaret and her entourage which were deemed to be an insult?
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Not done yetTemplate:Did you know nominations/Mandeville-Anthony v. The Walt Disney Company
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Created/expanded by Dr.K. (talk). Self nominated at 17:25, 2 November 2013 (UTC).
Article is new, long enough and within policy. The nom needs to complete his or her review of an DYK. To comply with MOS, I suggest changing the hook to:
- ALT1: ... that in 1949, copies of France Dimanche were seized in France because they were carrying pictures of Princess Margaret and her entourage, which were deemed to be an insult?
- At the very least, princess should be capitalised. --Sp33dyphil ©hatontributions 02:13, 3 November 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you very much Sp33dyphil for the review. I agree with your changes to the hook, save for the fact that the added title "Countess of Snowdon" may be a little too much, given that Princess Margaret is well-known without it. On the other hand I don't feel strongly about it, so I will not argue to remove it. I leave it up to you and the rest of the editors who will process this DYK. As far as the QPQ, I will get to it asap. Best regards. Δρ.Κ. λόγοςπράξις 02:56, 3 November 2013 (UTC)
- @Sp33dyphil: QPQ
Done as shown above. Δρ.Κ. λόγοςπράξις 06:00, 3 November 2013 (UTC)
All good now. --Sp33dyphil ©hatontributions 06:56, 4 November 2013 (UTC)
- Because Princess Margaret wasn't Countess of Snowden in 1949 (she wasn't even married yet), I've corrected ALT1 by piping the link so that it doesn't display the anachronistic title. BlueMoonset (talk) 08:09, 4 November 2013 (UTC)