- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by HalfGig talk 13:28, 7 December 2014 (UTC)
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I, a Woman
edit... that the 1965 Swedish/Danish film I, a Woman was the film debut for actress Essy Persson and the feature film directorial debut of Mac Ahlberg?
- Reviewed: Teenage (film)
- Comment: The 17 word stub found at AFD, was easily expanded to a a 626 word C-Class article... an easy 36x expansion.
5x expanded by MichaelQSchmidt (talk). Self nominated at 20:09, 24 October 2014 (UTC).
- Support and I offer the alt-blurb - ALT1:
... that Roger Ebert said the film I, a Woman exhibited "the maturity of a 13-year-old cranking the handle on the penny-peepshow at a county fair"?Lugnuts Dick Laurent is dead 19:35, 26 October 2014 (UTC) - I don't think the first hook works because the two people links take us to articles in poor condition. The ALT1 is a good funny hook -- however, there may be better alternatives. I've expanded the article a bit to include some of the more significant facts about the film which might inspire other hooks, such as:
- ALT2:
... that the popularity of the 1965 Danish-Swedish erotic film I, a Woman initiated a wave of sexploitation films into mainstream American theaters? - ALT3: ... that the popularity of the 1965 Scandinavian erotic film I, a Woman inspired Andy Warhol to make his experimental film I, a Man?
- — CactusWriter (talk) 18:03, 31 October 2014 (UTC)
- Support and I offer the alt-blurb - ALT1:
Interesting, on good sources. Please offer a source for the releases. I am used to the lead a summary (without refs) of the body. Make some of it body? I like ALT3 best, by far ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:13, 10 November 2014 (UTC)
- @MichaelQSchmidt: This has been on hold for over three weeks now. Are there any (inline) citations available to cover the release section? Fuebaey (talk) 16:34, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
- @Fuebaey: Okay... I've cited the many non-English release names. @Gerda Arendt: I have performed a few mods to the article under MOS:FILM... and I like ALT 3 also. Schmidt, Michael Q. 23:14, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
Thank you, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 23:23, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
