- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:30, 17 October 2011 (UTC)
Jacques Borlée
edit- ... that Jacques Borlée, the father and coach of Olympic medalist Olivia and twin athletes Jonathan and Kevin Borlée, won a silver medal at the 1983 European Athletics Indoor Championships?
Created/expanded by Fram (talk). Self nom at 14:07, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
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- There are several paragraphs with no citations, especially in the Coaching section. Furthermore, reference 4 goes to a general Palmares list rather than a specific one giving Borlee's record. Likewise, there needs to be a specific citation of the (undoubted) statement about him being the father of Olivia, Jonathan and Kevin. -- Daemonic Kangaroo (talk) 06:30, 7 October 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for your comments, and the work you already did at the article. I have added a lot more reliable and more specific sources, I hope I have done everything that is needed now, but if you want any more improvements or changes, just let me know! Fram (talk) 07:11, 7 October 2011 (UTC)
Additional citations check out fine. All now good to go, although it would be neat if you could cite two further statements: "His personal record over 400m is 45.4 seconds." and "The Belgian 4x400m relay team, including his two sons Kevin and Jonathan, ended fifth at the same games, also setting a new national record in that race." (The last bit needs citation.) Daemonic Kangaroo (talk) 14:20, 7 October 2011 (UTC)
- Both cited now, thanks. Fram (talk) 14:36, 7 October 2011 (UTC)
- That's great. Daemonic Kangaroo (talk) 14:37, 7 October 2011 (UTC)
- Both cited now, thanks. Fram (talk) 14:36, 7 October 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for your comments, and the work you already did at the article. I have added a lot more reliable and more specific sources, I hope I have done everything that is needed now, but if you want any more improvements or changes, just let me know! Fram (talk) 07:11, 7 October 2011 (UTC)