Template:Did you know nominations/James A. Kelly, Jr.
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 16:35, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
| DYK toolbox |
|---|
James A. Kelly, Jr.
edit- ... that James A. Kelly, Jr. sought to have his prison sentence delayed until after he had earned his master's degree?
- ALT1:... that James A. Kelly, Jr. eliminated funding for the Massachusetts State Police's Subversive Activities Control Unit?
- Reviewed: Philip Lindsley
Created by RFD (talk), Hirolovesswords (talk). Nominated by Hirolovesswords (talk) at 03:32, 27 March 2014 (UTC).
I like the first hook, but I have to accept the offline references in good faith. The article is new enough (five days old), long enough, and referenced in every paragraph. The hooks are a good length - I tinkered with the first one, adding "had earned his" and hyperlinked master's degree. Good to go, I think. Ackatsis (talk) 12:59, 31 March 2014 (UTC)
