Template:Did you know nominations/John Clapp (baseball)
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 21:21, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
John Clapp (baseball)
edit... that John Clapp was the inaugural manager of the modern-day San Francisco Giants?
Created/expanded by Albacore (talk). Self nom at 23:33, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
| Format | Citation | Neutrality | Interest |
|---|---|---|---|
| Harrias talk | Harrias talk | Harrias talk | Harrias talk |
| Length | Newness | Adequate citations |
Formatted citations |
Reliable sources |
Neutrality | Plagiarism |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Harrias talk | Harrias talk | Harrias talk | Harrias talk | Harrias talk | Harrias talk | Harrias talk |
- The "Early life" and "After baseball" sections don't really look that necessary, unless you are going to be adding more information later: they could just all be merged into one section entitled "Life and career" or something of the sort: however if there is more to come, then I don't see a huge problem. Regardless of this, the article checks out fine for DYK. The hook could be a bit more hooky, but then and again, if you're interested in baseball, I guess it might be. I would suggest, per rule C2 that you mention baseball in the hook. Harrias talk 15:09, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
Alt just discovered... ... that John Clapp played in 212 consecutive Major League Baseball games, primarily as a catcher? Albacore (talk) 16:32, 2 October 2011 (UTC)Alt2 ... that John Clapp, a catcher, played in 212 consecutive Major League Baseball games?- Alt 2 sounds interesting. With the record at 2,632 consecutive games (Cal Ripken, Jr) I wonder if it's enough? Rich Farmbrough, 22:53, 9 October 2011 (UTC).
- Alt 2 sounds interesting. With the record at 2,632 consecutive games (Cal Ripken, Jr) I wonder if it's enough? Rich Farmbrough, 22:53, 9 October 2011 (UTC).
- Have the alts been approved? Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:25, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
- I'm afraid my knowledge of baseball is not large, Frankie Hayes "caught 312 consecutive games" at the time a record. It's not clear whether "caught" means "was catcher at" or "Caught a player". Maybe the Baseball project could advise. Rich Farmbrough, 13:28, 16 October 2011 (UTC).
- Hope they give feedback quickly. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:34, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
- I'm not sure I understand the alternate interpretation being proposed, but the excerpt indeed indicates that Hayes played as catcher in 312 consecutive games. isaacl (talk) 02:43, 17 October 2011 (UTC)
- I'm afraid my knowledge of baseball is not large, Frankie Hayes "caught 312 consecutive games" at the time a record. It's not clear whether "caught" means "was catcher at" or "Caught a player". Maybe the Baseball project could advise. Rich Farmbrough, 13:28, 16 October 2011 (UTC).
- Personally, I prefer the original hook, but would tweak it to read: "... that John Clapp was the inaugural manager of baseball's New York Gothams, which would become the modern-day San Francisco Giants?" -Dewelar (talk) 02:57, 17 October 2011 (UTC)
- Approve, please put in queue. Albacore (talk) 21:52, 17 October 2011 (UTC)
For clarity, based on above review. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:36, 17 October 2011 (UTC)
