Template:Did you know nominations/Juana Wangsa Putri
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 12:17, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
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Juana Wangsa Putri
edit... that former Indonesian taekwondo athlete Juana Wangsa Putri won two bronze medals at the Asian Games?
- Reviewed : Battle of Labuan
Created by Raymarcbadz (talk). Nominated by Annas86 (talk) at 06:33, 20 January 2015 (UTC).
One of the requirements for a DYK is that the article should be neutral. I do not consider this article neutral as it uses several un-encyclopedic expressions such as "crashed out", "soundly beaten", "edged out" and worst of all "suffering a disgraceful defeat" which appears to be a criticism of the referee. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:38, 11 February 2015 (UTC)
- @Cwmhiraeth: I've made a few copyedits, care to finish this review? Fuebaey (talk) 19:29, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
Thanks. I think it is neutral enough now as well as long enough and new enough. I didn't detect any copyright/close paraphrasing issues and the hook is the main problem now. Using the word "former" suggests she is dead or retired and the article does not state this. As far as I can see the sources do not back up the claim of bronze in 1998, made in the article and hook. I have added an extra reference to source the silver medal claim so perhaps we could have:
- ALT1 ... that in 2002, Indonesian taekwondo practitioner Juana Wangsa Putri won a silver medal at the Asian Championships and a bronze at the Asian Games? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:33, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
