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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 10:54, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
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Julia Sand
edit... that Julia Sand was a pen pal of U.S. President Chester A. Arthur?
Created by Futurist110 (talk). Self nominated at 23:57, 27 May 2013 (UTC).
Date, size, are fine. Primary concern involves no footnotes; there are some Harvard style citations without any hyperlinks (please see WP:CITE for how-to). Even if we were to accept dead-tree Harvard style (which I wouldn't be), the entire "Interpretation" section seems totally unreferenced. As such, this fails due to no references (but ping me on talk for a re-review if this is fixed in time). I'd also suggest a more interesting hook:- ALT1: ... that Julia Sand, a pen pal of U.S. President Chester A. Arthur, might have had significant impact on his presidency? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:47, 28 May 2013 (UTC)
- Please give me a couple of days and I will address all of your concerns. Thank you very much. Futurist110 (talk) 08:03, 29 May 2013 (UTC)
- OK--I think that I fixed everything in this article by now. Futurist110 (talk) 08:09, 1 June 2013 (UTC)
- Please give me a couple of days and I will address all of your concerns. Thank you very much. Futurist110 (talk) 08:03, 29 May 2013 (UTC)
There are still some unreferenced paragraphs. I'll defer it to another reviewer, particularly as I proposed an alt hook. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:48, 1 June 2013 (UTC)
- I approve of your alternate hook. As for the unreferenced paragraphs, let me fix them within the next couple of days. Futurist110 (talk) 00:28, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
- OK--I think that I cited everything that I need to cite in this article by now. Futurist110 (talk) 00:31, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
- I approve of your alternate hook. As for the unreferenced paragraphs, let me fix them within the next couple of days. Futurist110 (talk) 00:28, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
- New reviewer needed to check issues previously raised plus the new ALT1 hook (less interesting original hook has been struck). BlueMoonset (talk) 00:31, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
- Seems to be fine, but lacks citations for the end of the Vist of Arthur section. I am willing to AGF on book sources.--Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 21:59, 10 June 2013 (UTC)
- I fixed what you told me to fix here. Is this article good to go right now? Futurist110 (talk) 00:11, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
This article is new enough and long enough. The referencing issue has been fixed and the ALT1 hook is hereby approved. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:05, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
