Template:Did you know nominations/JumpStart Toddlers

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 03:32, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

JumpStart Toddlers

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• ... that the Chicago Sun-Times credits JumpStart Toddlers (1996) as the first video game targeted towards babies? Source: Chicago Sun-Times 1997 article
  • Comment: Open to alternative suggestions for the hook.

QPQ: Template:Did you know nominations/Qadi al-Fadil

Article created by Coin945 on January 20, 2022 (talk). Self-nominated at 16:27, 20 January 2022 (UTC).

• Article creation date was recent enough, size is adequate, Copyvio score is very good and the hook is interesting while cited in-line properly, but you need to write "the" before Chicago Sun-Times and the source should have a title on this page; do this by using [ ] with the URL first. Also, the article is using an unreliable source in PR Newswire that has gotta go for it to meet the DYK eligibility and the QPQ needs an icon representing the verdict before it counts properly. K. Peake 22:04, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

• Note to Coin945 and K. Peake: the QPQ is not yet fully done—reviews are not considered complete until one of the review icons from the table above the edit window has been included as part of the review. I hope it will be completed soon. Thank you. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:19, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

• I agree with you BlueMoonset and the detail of my possible vote has now been updated to reflect this. K. Peake 22:04, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

• Thank you for the review @Kyle Peake: and @BlueMoonset:. I've posted my comments below: --Coin945 (talk) 22:52, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
  1. Added "the" before Chicago Sun-Times
  2. Added title to source
  3. Question: Why is the press release publisher PR Newswire unreliable?
  4. Added icon to QPQ

• Look at WP:RSP, where PR Newswire is clearly listed as unreliable. K. Peake 07:49, 3 February 2022 (UTC)

• @Kyle Peake: I've addressed this by removing all PR Newswire links.--Coin945 (talk) 12:59, 3 February 2022 (UTC)

• @Coin945: Everything seems good now, this should be ready for promotion to DYK! K. Peake 21:38, 3 February 2022 (UTC)