- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:24, 5 December 2016 (UTC)
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Kambalny
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Kambalny volcano
... that Kambalny (pictured)? during the Holocene suffered a landslide that travelled for 20 kilometres (12 mi)?Source: "The next collapse involved both old and emerging cones and resulted in the second debris avalanche, which surmounted 350-m-high hills and formed a 5-km-wide and 20-km-long deposit SSW from the volcano" Source, page 133
- Reviewed: Bombing of Nagaoka in World War II
- Comment: A prior version of the article was longer but a lot of text was copyvio.
5x expanded by Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk). Self-nominated at 21:11, 6 November 2016 (UTC).
- Comment: perhaps the hook should say
" ... that during the Holocene epoch, Kambalny (pictured) suffered a landslide that travelled for 20 kilometres (12 mi)?"-- Notecardforfree (talk) 10:54, 7 November 2016 (UTC)- That also works. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 16:10, 7 November 2016 (UTC)
- Okay then, I'll officially make this an ALT. Best, -- Notecardforfree (talk) 16:41, 7 November 2016 (UTC)
- ALT1
" ... that during the Holocene epoch, Kambalny (pictured) suffered a landslide that travelled for 20 kilometres (12 mi)?"
ALT1 wording preferred - expansion in time period ok, earwigs copyvio clear. QPQ done. you need to put inline ref after the sentence that makes up the hook. I can't access the article so will accept in good faith. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:24, 12 November 2016 (UTC)
- @Cas Liber: So done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 15:21, 12 November 2016 (UTC)
- @Casliber: Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 15:21, 12 November 2016 (UTC)
- ALT1
- @Casliber and Jo-Jo Eumerus: I was going to promote this, but surely a landslide is an event, and it is the debris that moves and not the landslide? Could we have a differently-worded hook to reflect this? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:52, 23 November 2016 (UTC)
- @Cwmhiraeth: Yes, but I've seen "landslide moves" constructions as well. That said, I've written an ALT. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 16:12, 23 November 2016 (UTC)
- ALT1
... that Kambalny (pictured)? during the Holocene suffered a landslide whose sliding mass travelled for 20 kilometres (12 mi)?Source: "The next collapse involved both old and emerging cones and resulted in the second debris avalanche, which surmounted 350-m-high hills and formed a 5-km-wide and 20-km-long deposit SSW from the volcano" Source, page 133
- ALT1
- @Cwmhiraeth: Yes, but I've seen "landslide moves" constructions as well. That said, I've written an ALT. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 16:12, 23 November 2016 (UTC)
- ALT2 ... that a landslide on Kambalny (pictured) during the Holocene caused debris to travel for 20 kilometres (12 mi)? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:55, 23 November 2016 (UTC)
- Comment: perhaps the hook should say
Reviewer needed to check ALT2, which is a better wording than the previous hooks, all of which have been struck. (Cas Liber, might you be willing to do the honors, since you've already checked the article?) BlueMoonset (talk) 06:13, 3 December 2016 (UTC)
