Template:Did you know nominations/Kammermusik No. 2 (ballet)

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The result was: promoted by Desertarun (talk) 07:41, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

Kammermusik No. 2 (ballet)

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• ... that George Balanchine's ballet Kammermusik No. 2 was referred as "Kammer-computer" by ballerina Karin von Aroldingen because it is "speedy"?

• Reviewed: Canadian Idiot
• Comment: Offline source

Created by Corachow (talk). Self-nominated at 11:50, 24 May 2021 (UTC).

• Article is new enough, long enough, neutrally written, and well-sourced. QPQ good. No copyvio detected. Hook is interesting, but maybe let's rephrase to be a little clearer: "... that George Balanchine's ballet Kammermusik No. 2 was referred as "Kammer-computer" by ballerina Karin von Aroldingen because it is "speedy"? (Offline source accepted IGF.) Cstickel(byu) (talk) 19:24, 8 June 2021 (UTC)

• Thanks for the review, I replaced "as" with "because" per your suggestion. Corachow (talk) 21:57, 8 June 2021 (UTC)