Template:Did you know nominations/Kepler-47c

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The result was: promoted by — Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:21, 16 January 2013 (UTC)

Kepler-47c

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... that Kepler-47c is a circumbinary planet orbiting in the habitable zone of Kepler-47, a binary star system?

Created by Greengreengreenred (talk). Self nom at 06:04, 6 January 2013 (UTC)

Article length (2190 characters), date of creation (5 January) satisfy criteria. It is sourced and neutral, and contains inline citations where required. Hook length is good, but hook may need to be made more enticing to the average reader. Mind matrix 17:02, 6 January 2013 (UTC)

New suggestion:

... that Kepler-47 is the first binary star system to be discovered to have multiple orbiting planets, one of which orbits in its habitable zone?

(Hook review only) I think that's an improvement on the original. Based on that and the previous review, this one is now good to go. Miyagawa (talk) 16:59, 13 January 2013 (UTC)