Template:Did you know nominations/Leaning Tower of Toruń

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:46, 13 July 2014 (UTC)

Leaning Tower of Toruń

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... that legend has it that a monk of the Order of Teutonic Knights was ordered to build the Leaning Tower of Toruń (pictured) as punishment for falling in love with a woman and meeting her in secret, with the tilt of the tower signifying the deviance of his conduct from the rules of the Order?

Reviewed: Not self-nomination
Comment: This was an AfC draft which I copyedited before accepting; the sources are all Polish. It would be good if someone who knows Polish could look it over.

Created by 79.186.144.253 (talk), 5.174.105.21 (talk). Nominated by FireflySixtySeven (talk) at 20:27, 26 June 2014 (UTC).

The hook is over 200 characters. Yoninah (talk) 23:53, 2 July 2014 (UTC)

Sorry BlueMoonset, Yoninah, I didn't realize this had been reviewed. I have a couple of alternative hooks:

ALT1: ... that legend has it that a Teutonic Knight was ordered to build the Leaning Tower of Toruń (pictured) as punishment for falling in love with a woman, with the tower's tilt signifying his deviant conduct? (202 characters, including "(pictured)")

ALT2: ... that legend has it that a Teutonic Knight built the Leaning Tower of Toruń (pictured) as punishment for falling in love with a woman, with the tower's tilt signifying his deviant conduct? (187 characters, including "(pictured)") FireflySixtySeven (talk) 03:18, 12 July 2014 (UTC)

Full review needed now that hooks of valid length have been proposed. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:23, 12 July 2014 (UTC)

The article conforms to the DYK criteria of newness and length and the image is appropriately licensed. I have checked the sources with Google Translate and the only objection to its approval is that one paragraph is completely unreferenced. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:14, 13 July 2014 (UTC)

Cwmhiraeth, I have now added a couple of sources to the unreferenced part. FireflySixtySeven (talk) 08:42, 13 July 2014 (UTC)

Now good to go with ALT2. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:05, 13 July 2014 (UTC)