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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 00:51, 16 August 2012 (UTC)

Liga Geral dos Trabalhadores de Angola

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Created/expanded by Soman (talk). Self nom at 17:23, 12 August 2012 (UTC)

  • Length is ok (1700 characters or so), and all statements are properly sourced. However, I wonder if the article would'nt look better having a short introduction and a section below it explainig the origins of the union, rather than being written as a block. Furthermore, I believe the hook needs an additional comma after the link to FNLA so the stuff between the commas acts as a clarification, and a wikilink to the 1960s decade is also required (both for the hook and for the article).--Jetstreamer Talk 13:40, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
    • Fixed comma for hook. I don't think we generally link decades? I'll write a short lede for the article. --Soman (talk) 13:59, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
      • I've expanded the lede a bit and added sections now. --Soman (talk) 14:10, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
        • The article looks fine now with sections. The link to the 1960s is not that important. Good to go.--Jetstreamer Talk 21:17, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
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