- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: rejected by Harrias talk 21:24, 27 March 2012 (UTC)
Lori Greiner
edit- ... that QVC personality and "shark" Lori Greiner has invented over 350 consumer products?
- Reviewed: Hastings Prototype House
Created/expanded by Dtrebbien (talk). Self nom at 22:13, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
I'm concerned that some of the phrasing used in this article may be too close to that of its sources. Compare for example "A well-known television personality, Greiner has accumulated a large fan base from her appearances on Clever & Unique Creations by Lori Greiner, a monthly live television show that has been airing on the QVC network for more than 11 years" with "Lori has also accumulated a large fan-base from her position as a TV personality. Lori has her own show, "Clever & Unique Creations by Lori Greiner," appearing live each month on QVC TV for more than 11 years". This is an example only; I checked three sources (current FNs 2, 6 and 8) and was concerned with all three. Nikkimaria (talk) 21:17, 7 March 2012 (UTC)
- I've just left a note on the author's usertalkpage to notify him/her of the issues. Hope s/he comes back to fix things up soon. --PFHLai (talk) 16:39, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
Paraphrasing issue abundant. Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:09, 27 March 2012 (UTC)
